you drove by the woman standing on the verge
the woman with the shoulders of a long distance swimmer
and you told yourself her story:
she'd slept in the wiregrass
she carries nothing in her hands
she's slipped out of her life
she will take any lift offered
she doesn't want your attention
after you drove by the woman standing on a verge
the woman with tangled blonde hair and a straight back
you told yourself your story:
you slept where you landed
you slipped out of your life
you stopped choosing
you were attended to, made safe,
you know what almost happened.
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This was published in Blue Fifth Review's Summer Quarterly. Thank you, Sam.
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The second stanza. ***
You got the hair roots tickling my neck. ***
"she's slipped out of her life"
what almost bhappened
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Valuable moments. Excellent. *
Gorgeous. *
Nonnie, this is so insightful and gorgeously written. ❤️ ***
Nice. *
"...on the/a verge...what almost happened...."
I really love knowing stories I'm maybe not really supposed to know.
Lovely, a light dun color stunner, and nice placement for it in the journal!