to You
Your gaze—
I dissolved.
I dissolved.
Surrender wasn't a decision.
Your eyes didn't ask—
they saturated.
I couldn't look away—
Adoration, desire, Your gaze
slipping me away—
so perfectly, to You.
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saturation, attunement, orientation, and surrender — nothing spoken, only feeling.
Soundtrack:
Next to Me – RÜFÜS DU SOL
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Ah, the gaze.
So interesting to see your process and the arrival. I've been watching Richard Burton movies and I can see him saying/articulating both to great effect.
Your love poems resonate sincerity. I admire your economy too. Fine work.
Thanks so much!