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This version feels like an email I might have written—immediate, overflowing.
I began with a secret line, an unbroken confession of orientation, and let the poem follow it, carried toward that last line.
Soundtrack:
After Dark — Night Drive
Innerbloom — RÜFÜS DU SOL
Hey Now — London Grammar
devotion without demand.
Je suis à toi.
Made me think of WS sonnets. Love the combo of formality and passion. "Slightest look" reminded me of ee cummings. Nice work.
Many thanks!!
Sensitive lines.
Thanks Erika!
I'm currently reading Venus in Furs (Leopold von Sacher-Masoch), and this fits right in. Desire is addictive!
Thanks so much Emily! Yes, and yes!