Better Spent Time
by Jane Flett
I am listening to your day-tales,
though I wonder that
this time might be better spent
mistranslating health warnings
from foreign cigarettes and
pasting them to a gallery wall
or, perhaps,
composing a biro haiku
on the arch of a foot, proclaiming:
there is a tunnel
between your skin and the ground
for kisses to crawl.
I could be weaving a perpetual motion machine
from the hair of the girl in the typing pool
(she calls herself Rapunzel
and waits by a lidded phone
for no one to ring);
I could be staring at the sky as if it was a
Mercator map of the world,
firing an arrow like a pin
to pick the cloud
I would land upon.
I could, but I am here instead
with the heavy end of your day,
which is a quieter way to whisper
how I like you.
"there is a tunnel
between your skin and the ground
for kisses to crawl."
Beautiful. Love it.
I'm liking the voice in this very much. Fave.
A carefully crafted poem; first rate vision and use of language. A winner. *
Thanks people, you make me feel better that I am posting Day 9 on the 14th of April....