by James Yeh
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This story was originally published in elimae, as "Untitled."
This was my first published story. There is an illustrated version by Arthur Jones of up here: http://www.postitnotestories.com/2009/07/07/the-whole-story-by-james-yeh.
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Wow! This works! it hit me like that.. !! Cooper,,, no wonder he got it. I love this!
you packed a lot into one sentence. doesn't get much more economical than that! i like it.
thanks meg. yeah, i was glad he liked it!
hey, thanks lauren. i appreciate that.
Hyuck. Sums up a great deal for myself and many others, I'm sure.
Attn: "third or fourth" is the magic-in-numbers trick; one seldom sees so much depending on an "or," fixing a pair of numerical image stand-ins together, and making the rest of a subtly self-deprecating/transcending sentence sing. Thanks.
thanks zack! what a nice thing to say.
yes, what Zack said
i'm usually asleep after the first disco...if i even make it there.
nice work in confined space
Boom
thanks david
thanks robb