I. That woman who followed me home spoke nothing but lies. But you worried for days with a stubborn jealousy, refusing to touch me.
Late last night you went into the street and came home smelling feral. You turned your back to me and twitched with restless dreams.
In the moonlight, your shoulder blades shone like vestigial hinges for wings.
I looped my arm around you, and only when I found a breast could I finally sleep.
II. This life is difficult. We hide from phantoms, phones go unanswered, you threaten to shave your head and wear men's clothing. You worry that the mullahs suspect us, but that cannot be. We never touch in public. You weep and I shake when a neighbor knocks on the door, fearing the Mujahideen.
Here, where no light penetrates ten thousand shades of hatred, how will we find our way?
III. What tiny dances your hand makes on my skin.
My heart climbs the trellis of my ribs when your mouth moves over mine.
In this moment when nothing else matters, where nothing else gets in, I fear we might carve into each other.
My blood courses in a thicket of channels that empty into yours and back again to mine.
I sink into you, entering your bones. Such is my hunger that I suck your marrow.
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Among the things forbidden by the Taliban is Lesbian love. I met a couple who fled Afghanistan for that reason, among others. They spoke of penalties there and in Pakistan for women who love women.
I think the third stanza is where this work begins. It's lovely and real; loving is described in a living way. I can't picture someone from Afghanistan or Pakistan saying "trash to talk," maybe after years of American exposure, but not in their own country. I often begin a poem with an idea I'm in love with and end up with only a shadow of the original line influencing another poem that grows from it.
"In this moment when nothing else matters, where nothing else gets in, I fear we might carve into each other."
this feels so true, how this passion and the desire to devour the other is a natural birth from the diseased ecosystem being endured.
Amazing work.
Thanks for reading me, Meg. It means a lot. It is hard to imagine how fearful life must be for gays under the Taliban regime.
I love this, Gita! and boy oh boy oh boy would those sons of bitches over there hate it.
Brava.
Missed this back then. Thanks for redirecting us here. Facebook is good for something. Really, it is.
I love this, Gita, and am grateful that Gary's just commented so it appears under 'recent activity' otherwise I'd never have found it.
Ellie Lee and Gary Hardaway, thanks for reading this. The massacre in Orlando made me want to revive this so I posted it on my FB page.