Slap Happy
If you were a poem
you'd be called
Better Homes and Gardens.
That's a magazine,
she said.
Double duty, I replied.
If you were a poem
you'd be called
Refresher Course,
she said.
I didn't know
what to think of that.
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Author's Note
This wee poem completing for a place in my new poetry collection, perhaps offering comic relief?
Other stories by Gary Percesepe
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Yes (with these clarifications)
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If you were a poem
you'd be called
Better Homes and Gardens.
...
If you were a poem
you'd be called
Refresher Course,
she said.
I said, I didn't know
what to think of that.
ha---thanks for reading, tim
thanks, bill--helpful
i have made the changes--g
* with changes. Good piece.
What does Refresher Course smell like?
Dig the casual, snippet feel. Moments cut from time and made forever.
thank you sam r !
thanks for reading and commenting, shawn....