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You're a version of a person that you used to be

Pale like a tracing of a memory

Weak because of all that you refuse to be

Haunting those betrayed by infidelity

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Tim G. Young, Sep 16, 2017

"Haunting" indeed.*

Jill Chan, Sep 17, 2017

Subtle and amazing.

Mathew Paust, Sep 17, 2017

Eloquent depth charge still erupting in the undertones.

Emily Sparkles, Sep 18, 2017

Thank you, Tim, Jill, and Mathew. I'm very encouraged.

Kitty Boots, Sep 19, 2017

Nice, Emily.

Bill Yarrow, Sep 20, 2017

Good poem, Emily.
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Emily Sparkles, Sep 24, 2017

Thank you Kitty and Bill!

Sam Rasnake, Sep 27, 2017

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