Ode To A Wave

She comes and goes,

gingerly at times,

or, caution tossed,

a headlong rush

of foam and froth.

No matter,

I am steadfast,

keen to be immersed

once more

in her salty splendor.

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It is a ode to love and yearning, from the perspective of a boulder at the seaside.

Of course, I can only imagine how a boulder must feel. I only have my experience as a man, who loves a woman who just might be a wave.

D. Ohana, Sep 29, 2013

comments, critiques, suggestions welcome

Amanda Harris, Sep 30, 2013

There's not enough for me. Without the little author's note, I would have no clue what this is about.

Jake Barnes, Sep 30, 2013

Not a word wasted. A salty love story. *

D. Ohana, Sep 30, 2013

Thank you both for your comments.....I think it lies somewhere in between, but, I aspire to what Jake spoke of.

Fin Sorrel, Nov 08, 2013

makes me think of my friends

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