55 words #5
by Bobbi Lurie
The specifics of the story expressed a tragedy of such magnitude that the limitations of the classics, of the sages and the traditions of the wise were glaringly, apparently untrue. Their secret teachings delineating specific steps on the quest and the stages of attainment, beautiful, yet neutral, an oversimplistic reading of the people we meet.
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55 word challenge plus journal fragments
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Yes, Bobbi and yes, again.
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Oh, yes. Here comes Buddha, coming down the road. Right on time. Shoot on the count of three ... one ... two ...
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"Their secret teachings delineating specific steps on the quest and the stages of attainment, beautiful, yet neutral..." Great phrasing. The compressed form for this series creates a strong voice. I like.
Yes, a very strong voice, speaking from an elevated and broad perspective, beautifully written.