Snow Angel in the Sand
"It goes to infinity and back.
That is how much I
love you".
She looked down into the sand
plopped down and made a snow angel,
Pushing the mud
with her arm and legs,
like windshield wipers
of a car
on a rainy day
"Auntie ... Auntie,
How much I love you".
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Author's Note
Another short poem, my only love poem, from the beach series,
What do you think? ... sentimental , but true
Other stories by Agnes Ezra Arabella
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Sounds a lot like a kid doing a good job of being a kid (niece or nephew, or even "adopted" niece or nephew).
A good catch, well caught.
Lovely poem.
Enjoyed the directness. Very in the moment. I like it.
I love the title and what Sam said, I agree.