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    Ramon Collins
    May 07, 03:09pm

    A non-writer person posted this jewel (out of the blue) on my Facebook page yesterday:

    When I Was Younger, I Put My Face Close To The Fan To Hear My Robot Voice.

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    Walter Bjorkman
    May 08, 06:35pm

    who says they are not a writer?

  • Darryl_falling_water.thumb
    Darryl Price
    May 08, 09:35pm

    When

    I was younger I
    put my face close

    to the fan to
    hear my robot voice.

    When

    I was younger
    I put
    my face close

    to the fan
    to hear my
    robot voice.

    Sure seems like writing to me.

  • Darryl_falling_water.thumb
    Darryl Price
    May 08, 09:37pm

    1 more:

    When

    I was younger
    I put

    my face close
    to the fan

    to hear my
    robot voice.

    Still seems like writing, yep.

  • 3a.thumb
    Walter Bjorkman
    May 08, 09:42pm

    The first is the best Darryl, as often is the case

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    Susan Tepper
    May 09, 12:37pm

    I just love that line, it is a complete poem unto itself

  • Nv_kid.thumb
    Ramon Collins
    May 09, 03:45pm

    The young woman who posted it says she's not a writer. I disagreed.

    I'll pass on your comments -- maybe they'll help convince her she's wrong.

    Thank you . . .

  • 0388e1260hbw.thumb
    Mark Reep
    May 11, 11:06am

    She's a writer.

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