Forum / my poem Daisy in the Somerville News

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  Susan Tepper

  Aug 17, 02:49pm

  Big Thanks to Editor Doug Holder (Ibbetson Street Press & fellow f'naut)

  http://www.thesomervillenews.com/archives/18100

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  Darryl Price

  Aug 17, 07:03pm

  Loved everything about this poem. It perfectly captures that sad summertime feeling for me--from the lawn chair to the book to the imagining that follows--I could feel the breeze, the sun, and the longing. Nicely done!

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  Gill Hoffs

  Aug 17, 08:25pm

  Congratulations!

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  Joani Reese

  Aug 18, 02:51pm

  ...Unaware of the great expanse of
  Clipped emerald lawn

  Yawning at crisp sails cutting
  Across the bay...

  Nice texture of hard sound here, Susan. Where O Where IS love? Well done.

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  MaryAnne Kolton

  Aug 18, 04:42pm

  So very nicely done, Miss Susan

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  James Lloyd Davis

  Aug 18, 09:39pm

  Susan, such a pretty piece. A fine portrait.

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  Sam Rasnake

  Aug 18, 10:02pm

  I remember this piece. Great writing to the lines, Susan. Congratulations.

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  Susan Tepper

  Aug 19, 10:08am

  Thank you so much everyone who posted here, I'm most appreciative of your kind words~

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  Robert Vaughan

  Aug 19, 11:54am

  Just gorgeous work, Susan. You inspire me!

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  Susan Tepper

  Aug 19, 04:31pm

  Robert! Thank you!

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