Hi, Henry, thanks for reading 'Teacher.' Your helpful comment is greatly appreciated. I look forward to reading more of your work, including your longer stories already posted here, which I have looked over but need to read more completely in order to comment upon intelligently. I like your writing style and your topics. You have an interesting background, judging from your wall statements.
You're welcome, Henry. I think that others may not see your work as the style of fiction that's being written today. It's got more of an essay flavor to it perhaps. For example, in this story, there is no ending to the plight of the professor, but rather the focus is on the theory itself, so the character is somehow lost when he could be made so much more vital. But your writing is wonderfully styled and your use of language is excellent. I'm learning that you can't please all the people all the time, so I personally am happy when a few are reached!
Hi, Henry, thanks for reading 'Teacher.' Your helpful comment is greatly appreciated. I look forward to reading more of your work, including your longer stories already posted here, which I have looked over but need to read more completely in order to comment upon intelligently. I like your writing style and your topics. You have an interesting background, judging from your wall statements.
You're welcome, Henry. I think that others may not see your work as the style of fiction that's being written today. It's got more of an essay flavor to it perhaps. For example, in this story, there is no ending to the plight of the professor, but rather the focus is on the theory itself, so the character is somehow lost when he could be made so much more vital. But your writing is wonderfully styled and your use of language is excellent. I'm learning that you can't please all the people all the time, so I personally am happy when a few are reached!
Thanks for your comments on "Enemy Camp," Henry!