point

I am
beginning

to see
yours but

are you
seeing

mine
too

or do
we have

problems
seeing or

is your
point

not
the

point
I am

trying
to see

when
pointing

out
what

we have
become

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Tim G. Young, Jul 17, 2023

This "point" is sharp!*

Darryl Price, Jul 17, 2023

I agree. I like it!

Valerie Henderson, Jul 17, 2023

Thanks :) :)

David Ackley, Jul 20, 2023

Good point.

Valerie Henderson, Jul 20, 2023

haha thanks! :)

Sam Rasnake, Aug 02, 2023

Very William Carlos Williams. I like it.

"trying
to see"

Valerie Henderson, Aug 02, 2023

Thanks for reading :)

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