by Tom Allman
Magdalena followed the receding tide, her tiny feet leaving no rumors in the hard sand. She gathered only the most beautiful shells and presented them to her waiting Abuela. Her grandmother told her that the only things that a woman truly owns are her dreams. She told her that she should lock her dreams in the shells and hide them under her bed.
When Magdalena showed the first signs of becoming a woman her parents started their negotiations. Her father was a landowner and had several head of cattle; there were many suitors. Magdalena sat in her room, with her shells, wondering at the commotion.
The morning of her wedding Magdelana's Mother and Grandmother explained what her duties would be. Magdalena excused herself, retrieved the hatchet from the hearth, and went into her room. The older ladies heard a gentle sobbing then the crash of hatchet on conch and chambered nautilus. Wiping away the last tears of a little girl, she stridently emerged and announced that she was ready to be a good wife.
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This was a hard story to write because of the subject matter; the practice of arranged marriages. I have three daughters whose hopes and dreams are very important to me.
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Beautiful. Full of hope and sadness. fave
Oh, wonderful! It is, as MaryAnne said, full of sadness, but it's so beautifully realised and the ending is perfect. Actually, I just want to say the whole thing is my favourite.
Wow I really love this, beautiful, fave!
I actually read this a few more times and I like it even more, its beautiful, and sad. It says something about the dreams we have and the realities of existence.
this is a real classic. should be famous.