by Roberta
Under cover of darkness
we let go of our
day-time selves.
In this coaly no-time
strewn with fallen stars,
you are a roaming panther
and I am a tangle of snakes.
You are teeth -- arms --
ragged whispers. You are
everything you'd never say
too far from here. For which
I wait -- with teeth and tongue.
For which I wait with half-
closed eyes, though the
sounds of my voice catch in
my throat. Though I bite
down your name
over, over.
Your nails draw
scarlet hieroglyphs over
my skin. The beauty is
we can't see yet.
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This is so striking and powerful. "you are a roaming panther
and I am a tangle of snakes"...and the scarlet hieroglyphs and that very last line. Great work. *
oh, roberta, this is v v good. such images--
Though I bite
down your name
over, over.
--have been there (am there now)--yes
"you are a roaming panther
and I am a tangle of snakes."
Evocative. Sensual. Outstanding. Fav. Nice to rediscover your work at F'naught (I've been away too long).
love this.
Archetypes for sure. Maybe inspired by a tattooed Bette P.?
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