The white and yellow are sublime and desperately powerful, like angry screaming over tears and through laughter or hatred. Maybe the words are about crying or laughing, but the expressions are altogether impenetrable and distant. The jokes told behind the teeth and through the tongue are not funny—the question then begging to be asked—are they really jokes? The words themselves, when separated from the syntax and flow of the language, are funny in the way of tired women pestering husbands or smiling dogs [or children falling down]. My own words dissolve in my mouth like breath mints that smell of empty broken promises and unfiltered cigarettes. And my resolve follows.
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I like what this says about words, Marc. Talking. (I wonder, what about starting on the second sentence, maybe cutting the last?), just a thought. I really like this. I like what you're doing in all of these, Marc!
I really like the way this piece works. Also, I really agree with Kim's suggestion! Your work is very lovely Marc!
Interesting stance to this piece, sort of removed and objective. Glad I came across it.