It Takes Three Heartbeats For Me To Fall In Love
by Kyle G
Thump.
You caught the corner of my eye from a distance. Luckily, I was already sitting down.
Thump.
You noticed me waiting at the bus stop. With one glance, you took control of my body, life, and soul. I smiled.
Thump.
You kept walking, out of sight. My heart stopped beating. I still love you.
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...and the same number to fall apart.
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I like this, Kyle -- a nice description (with a good beginning, middle and end) of those little encounters we've all experienced.
Nice description of a moment. Fits well within the 55-word premise.
This happens all the time, and no one has had the courage to admit it but you. I am suddenly in love with 55 words. This is my first visit to this group. What an appropriate post for me to read!