by Joseph Young
JOSEPH YOUNG
Joseph Young
You might start with the top of the head, where the heat goes. This is first, first from the womb, the first word.
Joseph Young
There might have been a faith that placed it in the mouth, not the liver or in the heart.
Joseph Young
It might have been the desert that made things first for the eye. Now the trees all fall to light.
Joseph Young
She might have been the mother or a sister, her head was navy with the moon.
Joseph Young
You might end with the feet, washed, where much the world will go.
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Over at Big Other, Shya Scanlon spoke of developing an anthology of stories in which a character shares the name of the author.
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"her head was navy with the moon." Lovely.
Clever and inventive. Each micro is beautiful.
Great job. The language flows beautifully.
As Susan said, "her head was navy with the moon" - that's really lyrical.
My head is navy with this piece.
Very nice!