by FM Le
stepped away from me
after leaning on me
like I was a wall
my face felt stiff
your fingers stopped
your body was cold
through my clothes
I touched your buttons
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Nicely done. Loved "through my clothes/I touched your buttons."
Thanks Darryl! Experimenting with smaller amounts of words lately.
Sensual little scene. I like it.
terrific minimalist work, where every word counts and every image connects
Thank you Erika and David!!