Discussion → Pretzel

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    Andrew O. Dugas
    Sep 30, 04:53pm

    My flash piece "Pretzel" was published in Flatmancrooked a few weeks ago. Check it out here: http://www.flatmancrooked.com/archives/4472

    Thanks,

    Andy

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    David Erlewine
    Oct 06, 08:05am

    hi andy, would be great if you and james posted your stories on fictionaut and then added as a story here. i can't open the link from my current location, not even as cache. bummed like you wouldn't believe. will look at from home or if/when you post on the naut. d

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    Andrew O. Dugas
    Oct 07, 04:07pm

    Hey David,

    I will post it here sometime in the future, but in the meantime, I do want to drive as much traffic to FMC as possible. Have you been able to get to it?

    http://www.flatmancrooked.com/archives/4472

    LMK and thanks for your interest!

    Andy

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    David Erlewine
    Oct 07, 04:12pm

    Hi Andy,

    I understand completely about the traffic. That's absolutely true, something I lose sight of sometimes.

    Your story is superb. The greatest part to me was this:

    “Look here,” he said. On the screen was his email, the Drafts folder. He clicked on one of the messages, something written but never sent. The subject said NOT A PARASITE. The body said CHERYL MAYER HAS CANCER.

    That killed me. I worked in a law firm for years. I know Jack and either you do too or you got a hell of an imagination. Great piece.

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    Andrew O. Dugas
    Oct 08, 02:50pm

    Thanks for the props, David! I'll be reading this in public soon. Always ping me when you have something published or up on this site. I read your Dachau piece and will read again before commenting.

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    David Erlewine
    Oct 09, 06:08am

    Andrew, great! I'm sure the public will like this story. Seems like a perfect one to read them...funny and sad and well written.

    Thanks for checking out the Dachau piece.

    Nice to be in touch,
    David

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    David Erlewine
    Oct 09, 06:08am

    Heh, now I get formal. I meant to say Andy. Doh!


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