Discussion → Arcana Magi NEW and NOTES: Feb 18, 2010

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    H-M Brown
    Feb 18, 03:17pm

    Good afternoon fellow readers,

    Arcana Magi Revisions are up. I also made grammatical adjustments to Chapter 4-6, removing only the Passive Voice and any badly written "was" statements. I don't know how much the story has improved but you should not come across any Passive Voice at least that would otherwise turn you off.

    Arcana Magi Zero will undergo another Re-write in a later date. I hope to get rid of any Passive Voices I missed in there.

    Until then Enjoy Arcana Magi. :)



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