Forum / New story at BENT COUNTRY

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  Henry Standing Bear

  May 26, 03:37pm

  "The Revisionist"

  http://bentcountry.blogspot.com/2014/05/the-revisionist-by-sheldon-lee-compton.html

• Frankie Saxx

  May 27, 09:18am

  It's always cleaner, looking back. Less flies. Nice writing, Sheldon. Slow and resonant.

  (The switch from 1st to 3rd near the end for a few lines tripped me up.)

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  Henry Standing Bear

  May 27, 06:19pm

  Thanks a great deal for reading, and letting me know about the shift. Was probably left in the re-write. It was originally in third. Preciate it.

• Frankie Saxx

  May 27, 06:52pm

  I thought it might be an artifact. Good story, I enjoyed it.

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