I have a short piece up on the evolution of one sentence:
http://draftjournal.com/blog/heath/#more-717
Cheers,
Marcelle
Excellent. I like your courage here and the determination to say what you feel, and to say it through until the thought is fully formed and finished. Nice!
This is wonderful Marcelle. I like the view of transformations here.
Hey that is really neat. I love how you talk about your writing and construct and deconstruct the process sentence by sentence.
Curious - where'd the name Stoffi come from? I have a friend called Stoff/ Stoffi (from Christoph), so I wonder if this comes from an old family nickname? I also have friend named Gert (also a male and usually a male name). I like your name choices but they are most uncommon for German girls' names.
Thank you so much Darryl, Sam, and Michelle for reading. Michelle - my mom had a childhood friend named Stoffi, and I did some online research for Gert. I like how different the names sound as well :)
I love to see evolutions like this. Thanks for sharing it.
Thank you, Gone, for reading!