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    M.H.
    Jun 11, 10:01pm

    Hi All,
    I have a new story up at matchbook - an older version first appeared here. Many thanks to those who commented/read it.
    Cheers,
    Marcelle
    http://www.matchbooklitmag.com/

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    Sam Rasnake
    Jun 12, 02:29am

    Great movement here -

    "At supper, Mattie barely touched her black pudding. She was escorted to the south lawn, where a blanket was placed over her shoulders. Gulls plunged to the sea below. A figure moved in the distance. She glassed the vegetation with binoculars until she located the girl, Agnes, making her way across the land. The terrier was invisible in the tall brush."

    Good story, Marcelle. Congratulations.

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    David Ackley
    Jun 12, 01:21pm

    Terrific piece. Congratulations!

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    Darryl Price
    Jun 12, 03:45pm

    Excellent! And it shows how brave you are as a writer. Unafraid of the truth in the image or to say out loud the crashing threads of a life's waterfall. Neat!

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    M.H.
    Jun 12, 07:00pm

    Thanks so much Sam, David, and Darryl :)

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    Robert Vaughan
    Jun 12, 10:44pm

    Loved this piece, Marcelle! Congratulations on a great publication!

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    M.H.
    Jun 13, 04:31am

    Thanks so much Robert!

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