Shawn Faulkner

Shawn Faulkner's Wall

Susan Gibb – Nov 27, 2009

(Wasn't able to post a comment to the story so I'm placing it here) Wonderful writing style; great narrative voice. Several conflicts create the tension underlying the narrator's own conflicts within himself.

I'm just not sure that the ending doesn't come a bit too quickly after his confrontation with the doctor. But then, he wasn't really hurting anyone until this.

Overall, very absorbing story about a character that I did like very much.

Victoria Lancelotta – Nov 20, 2009

oh cool, you're here!

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