by Joseph Young
PORNOGRAPHY
First
He went across the floor to where she sat. One sleeve of her shirt dropped to show her shoulder, salted and brown. One hundred fish filled the wave. Now, he said. Now is now.
Second
The car wouldn't start, sputtering time in falling snow. Crows stood in the tree above. Give me, she said, reaching over the knees.
Fourth
They walked the dog, hardly filling a black space in the dark. The houses had lit their windows red.
Fifth
Don't watch me, he said. I feel frail. She kept at it though, the bottles in the windows having broke the light.
Third
It was second to longest day. The swimming pool gleamed green under the calving sky. She curved her hip to the water and pushed. Now, like ever, he would not keep pace.
Sixth
As they ate their lunch, a thousand flowers the size of periods. Your hands, he said. Though she had no embarrassment.
Seventh
The ring twisted. It rained burnt gold on the black street.
Eighth
Leaves were bright crusts of bread in the grass. She filled her shirt to parade up the street, rocked back on her heels. That's too easy, he said, misunderstanding again.
Ninth
Her leg held steady the tree. We should rest, one of them said, for Christmas. The floor was a wasp of needles, the house a caught fire.
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Great form & order. I like the piece. Section 9 - a wasp of needles - wow.
I enjoyed this. Sober.
The concepts beyond some of your imagery is breathtaking: "They walked the dog, hardly filling a black space in the dark. The houses had lit their windows red."
"Third" being out of order intrigues my hypertextual nature.
I don't understand each scene, but they beg to be reread even for their beauty of diction alone.
My favorite of yours.
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