DRA musical - 1942…
Open on the General Jackson crowded with Marines, headed to (Tennessee Base),
at the front of the ship, young men laughing, unrealistic military dreams/wordless chatter...
LET IT RIDE .. main character is a marine en route to base...Solo verse, (all chorus “I wasn't ready to go”) … words stop at “tennessee's my brother,” as they dock, instrumentals continues/fades soon after excitement of Nashville port, arm and arm marines/friends
DANCE ALL NIGHT... Debutante ball ...gorgeous girls slow dancing with boys… spot light center left, not front of stage, main character is beautiful southern belle
BAR LIGHTS — glorifying Marines life, southern belles .. also when/where boy and girl meet
MY LOVE FOR YOU IS REAL — falling in love
Callous dialogue
IF I AM A STRANGER — before departing, goodbye to girl
CALL ME ON YOUR WAY BACK HOME— girl as he leaves
PEACEFUL VALLEY — WWII arrival
WISH YOU WERE HERE — WWII violence
OMG, ETC. — train ride home
JACKSON SKYLINE— returned soldier, PTS.. girl coming to comfort him...
marriage
HARDEST PART — duet… a tired couple trying, but struggling… he is now a wood worker, she a dancer/dance teacher
SHADOWLANDS — PTS Nightmare while sleeping with her
SO ALIVE - girl trying to save them... she sings/cries only “I … am on your side! It isn't real” repeat… boy singing snippet from TURN AROUND “its just the memory, and the distance and the damage still between us...” overlapping…
physical/verbal abuse
WHAT SIN — drug use after WWII … opiates into,
WHY DO THEY LEAVE — boy after drug use….
IN MY TIME OF NEED — girl discovered drug use, leaves him
MISS SUNFLOWER — sober boy, regret, apart/alone
AVENUES - girl, alone, saddened
DONT FAIL ME NOW — her dancing, him working.. emphasis on persistence, endurance, working so hard to forget something
Last verse of MEADOWLAKE ST. — Girl running out of to wood shop emphasis on the snare, harmonic build “… you an I” .. stops… winter [SEE BELOW]
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL — end
Ends with two long separated lovers,
happy and attached to things other than what they were, when one,
I think it should be the woman,
notices an imperfection or a signifier or inside joke in the oddest of places, at the oddest of times —
(lets say a post-ballroom dancing lesson which takes place in a huge hardwood floor studio, full of other young women, when she notices the callouses she has developed on the heels and toes on her feet while changing shoes, the kind her lover once wrote to her about in a poem while he was away at war, an allegory of the way love stays smooth within the arches of two flawed people…)
— and drops all her things and abandons what she has grown comfortable with,
turning and sprinting through city snow, lifting her dress to show her ankles as she runs madly past strangers,
ruining her gown, to THIS SONG to find this man,
a man equally moved on, and who is probably found hard at work, saw in hand, at a wood shop where he dirties himself to make desks and chairs and such,
and as he sees her.
They both pause, before he seemingly blows the thing off as mirage and begins to work again,
where upon she walks over to him and lifts a muddied foot to the unfinished furniture and applies his hand along its length as she stares at him,
tears building in his eyes to utter how ugly his insides have become since his return from war
before looking at her and spreading his thumb and index finger to massage the stiff skin at both ends,
which ignites her to respond, “I am too”.
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