by John Riley
Maybe not as sweet as it seems.
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"remembering my mind!" Great poem, John. *
(gold-painted tin?)
A sweet moment richly told. *
Great imagery in this. **
Thanks, everyone. (And thanks for the catch, Bill)
*, John. Agree with Rachna's imagery comment.
Sharply poignant. (Or poignantly sharp?) *
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Thanks David, Mathew, And Samuel
Good closing. I like.
Excellent.*
Thanks, Sam and Tim
Sweetly concise.
Great image/line: "wind so icy/ we were afraid to kiss. . . ." Fine poem, John.
Thanks, Emily and Ed
Beautiful. Thank you.
Thanks, Diane
Neat, and perfect.
Thanks, Darryl
just so!*
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"remembering my mind!"
Great poem, John.
*
(gold-painted tin?)
A sweet moment richly told. *
Great imagery in this. **
Thanks, everyone. (And thanks for the catch, Bill)
*, John. Agree with Rachna's imagery comment.
Sharply poignant. (Or poignantly sharp?) *
.
Thanks David, Mathew,
And Samuel
Good closing. I like.
Excellent.*
Thanks, Sam and Tim
Sweetly concise.
Great image/line: "wind so icy/ we were afraid to kiss. . . ." Fine poem, John.
Thanks, Emily and Ed
Beautiful. Thank you.
Thanks, Diane
Neat, and perfect.
Thanks, Darryl
just so!*