Beverly

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"remembering my mind!"
Great poem, John.
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(gold-painted tin?)

A sweet moment richly told. *

Great imagery in this. **

Thanks, everyone. (And thanks for the catch, Bill)

*, John. Agree with Rachna's imagery comment.

Sharply poignant. (Or poignantly sharp?) *

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Thanks David, Mathew,
And Samuel

Good closing. I like.

Excellent.*

Thanks, Sam and Tim

Sweetly concise.

Great image/line: "wind so icy/ we were afraid to kiss. . . ." Fine poem, John.

Thanks, Emily and Ed

Beautiful. Thank you.

Thanks, Diane

Neat, and perfect.

Thanks, Darryl

just so!*