There was a man.
There always is a man.
Let's say this man was a hippie
in the sixties and grew a beard, a blond
beard and hung out in Central Park
with his guitar and his lyrics. Let's say
he took too many drugs, drank too much
bourbon, slept with too many women.
Let's say it is today and you are
in your garden and are clipping back
the bushes and pulling out weeds
and this man comes to mind
whom you met twenty years
after he gave up New York and moved South.
You met him after he lost his family
because he drank too much bourbon
and slept with too many women who would
creep into his thoughts as he was making love
to his wife and although he was faithful to his wife,
she could feel Yoko Ono tearing them apart
because she thought they were tight like the Beatles.
You meet him at work and invite him over
to your house and he brings his guitar and tells you
a story about that one time in New York
his girlfriend was at a bar and John Lennon
walks in and takes a seat with Yoko or that
other woman he dated between Yoko.
Let's say that our man stayed at home
that evening because he had a cold,
or the flu, or was having a nervous breakdown.
Let's say his girlfriend decides not to call
him from a phone booth just down by the corner
to tell him to get his ass over to the bar
because John Lennon was there.
John Lennon was there.
Let's say this was the catalyst of his life.
The worst thing a woman could have done,
worst than divorcing him, worst than dying on
him like his mother did.
Let's say that this man comes to mind
while you are yanking out a tough root
and out of the corner of a dark
place you try never to visit you remember this
man died last year on John Lennon's birthday.
Imagine that.
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I really like this and the line breaks/structure fits it so well.
Great pun at the end too.
And great title too.
"Let's say this was the catalyst of his life."*
Let's say this is great.
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Grabbed me from the beginning and held me all the way through. I loved the rhythm and such a neat ending. Clever.
Very good, very good indeed. I like this very much.
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If that man's name was Mark, I think you may have a novel.
Clever and good. *
"Let's say this was the catalyst of his life."
Enjoyed.
This is gorgeous.
Thank you everyone for the comments. I really appreciate them. And believe it or not these are true stories.
Powerful.
I can not re*sist John Lennon
Thank you for the comments everyone. YAY.
Here is the most authentic moment in your story, for me: "Let's say it is today and you are in your garden and are clipping back the bushes and pulling out weeds and this man comes to mind whom you met twenty years after he gave up New York and moved South."
Because this is exactly where memories and stories come to me -- when my hands are in the dirt and I am in control of living things. *
*, Dulce. Excellent.
Thank you very much.
Let's say that nothing I could say is as wonderful as this writing. *
Regrets over what might have been: piercing.
Thank you.
Clever and attention-grabbing. I like it a lot.m**
Thanks!
Just read this again. Imagine that.
Thanks Tim.