Hello. I'm new to Fictionaut and hoped to get some feedback on Concessions, which I posted here. I thank you for reading it and critiquing if you have the time. I'm an MFA student at Old Dominion University an d a recovering newspaper reporter. Thank you all. Best, John
Hi John,
I looked, but can't find your story "Concessions"---
Hello Susan, I'm sorry but I took it down because a Website published it. Sorry for that annoyance, if it was one. If you still want to read it, it can be found at http://www.thetreehousemagazine.com/home/51-fiction/292-new-fiction-concessions.html
If you have published a text in Fictionaut and want some constructive feedback, or feel the text still isn't all fitting yet, then try The Workshop:
-> Add your text to this group (to do that, go to your text, then click on the “Group it” button above the title.) (note: your text will still be visible in the regular story-listing)
-> As a starter for feedback, add a comment with a note on the text/ or with specific questions.
-> Consider giving some feedback in return, to keep the workshop moving.
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Anyone can see it and join.