Mina stumbled and fell headlong into her apartment, smacking her knees and palms on the hardwood floor.
from this: http://www.fictionaut.com/stories/jurgen-fauth/celluloid
You're there. You win. I'm going to your link to read the rest of the story. Thanks for being the first, Jurgen. I can see you play well with others!
Yay! Thanks much Arlene. Now I just need to get the sentences after right.
Grab the reader.
Post the first line/s of your poems & the first sentence/s of your stories to see if we want to keep reading.
Post as little or as much as you want – it’s your test.
Hook us. We'll let you know if you're there yet.
This is a public group.
Anyone can see it and join.