Discussion → Ooo-ooo-ooo! I got one! ask me, ask me!
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This sounds like not only a fun thing but a good place to learn how to write that first line.
This is from one of my hypertext stories, written prose-style:
"it was a morning when the moon held steady in the face of the sun; it lingered its fingers of light on the treetops like a drunkard counts pickets to find his way home"
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Ooo-ooo-ooo! Hi Susan! Thanks for sharing this one with us here! Yeah, I love the image of a drunk counting the pickets. The link to the rest of this story is where? I wish I could've read more - so yes - a definite thumbs up!
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Thanks, Arlene. Here's the link to the story but I warn you, it's hypertext! <a href="http://susangibb.net/blog2/2009/06/100-days-project-35/">Day and Night</a>
Group Description
Grab the reader.
Post the first line/s of your poems & the first sentence/s of your stories to see if we want to keep reading.
Post as little or as much as you want – it’s your test.
Hook us. We'll let you know if you're there yet.
This is a public group.
Anyone can see it and join.