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  Arturo Ruiz

  Mar 13, 07:02pm

  Hi friends, I've got a new poem published in decomP's March issue.

  http://www.decompmagazine.com/whenallthelightsgoout.htm

  aloha,
  Loren

• Samuel Derrick Rosen

  Mar 13, 07:22pm

  Congrats Loren

  My fav lines

  Look, see, how the bees enter from the door in the east, like Kamikaze,
  buzz over the empty field toward the flames on the beach.
  Oh, the gritty spice of smoke riding on the breeze

• 
  Rachna K.

  Mar 18, 01:57pm

  Loren Congratulations! I love the last verse too.

• 
  John Riley

  Mar 18, 08:20pm

  Good one

• 
  Sam Rasnake

  Mar 19, 12:56pm

  A fine piece, Loren.

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