Thank you for the comments on this piece, Fictionaut readers. You encouraged me with this one and The Dead Mule School of Southern Literature published it. I'm dead chuffed. Cheers to you! http://www.deadmule.com/fiction/
Excellent!
Well, haysus, that first sentence almost made me weep. A killer...just went over and faved it. So glad I could.
Thanks Sheldon and Barry. This is a good place, eh?