wind still white
by Tim G. Young
moon light
night
wind still
white
garage door
bright
bubbles in
my pipe
red coals
glow
oh my
soul
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Pretty and intriguing. Reminded me of a whiter shade of pale. More positive though (maybe). Depends on how one reads last two lines. Both ways work :-) to me.
On a peaceful night. Lovely.
I thank you, Dianne and Erika.
A mantra for peace.
Thank you, Darryl.
Reminds me of Gwendolyn Brooks’ “We Real Cool”