s/lips/ery
by Sina Evans
I have orange in mind tonight
you're surprised I can tell, and I
won't be mumbling blue at you
tonight.
this orange, the one in mind it's
plump and uncomely: a persimmon
slippery on the lips slip slipped lip lip
slippery slippsery slippering slip
saltysweetsatinskinned uncitrussslipped
orange does you no justice at all.
you're surprised I can tell, and I
won't be mumbling blue at you
tonight.
this orange, the one in mind it's
plump and uncomely: a persimmon
slippery on the lips slip slipped lip lip
slippery slippsery slippering slip
saltysweetsatinskinned uncitrussslipped
orange does you no justice at all.
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Author's Note
Part of my 100 Days Summer 2012 project, a version can also be found at that blog (summer of fruit flies / blogspot / etc).
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I had fun reading this.
Good music to the lines. Enjoyed.
Playful, fruity, nutty flavor... if wine, would be fantastic with pasta. As poetry it's playful and fun.
Thanks fellas! I had fun (wineless, pastaless fun, but fun in any case) writing it!