by Michael Tusa
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Another powerful capture of a striking event, Michael.
Oh, wow. A whole, terrifying story in a few short lines.
Thanks guys! Glad you all are enjoyed it.
Consider taking out the last line--end with Jesus, make it all couplets.
Thanks Bill, I actually like that suggestion a lot. It felt a little weird ending on the last line.