by A. Starling
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I read this several times, it's certainly a poem to ponder.
I love the way it is formatted. Broken conversations opens clarity:I know you are crying but I don't want to face what that means.
Brilliant, Arexa, more poems please. Definite fav!
Thank you both for your comments. I'm glad to hear them.
I like this very much :)
Thank you both.
It has a beautiful twinkle to it.
Thank you, Darryl.
Very haiku-like through the first half or so then leaves the page as story. That's a great twist, and easily done. I think the use of broken lines and word spacing is effective here. The poem achieves much in a small space. I like it.